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*Test* Pokemon comic page by Golden-Brush *Test* Pokemon comic page by Golden-Brush
Okay you guys, I want your opinion
This my first time on digital comics lol

so I need your opinion on the layout and all that...
If I get the time i might be able to continue this comic :)

( Please don't ask me about the names, I just put things from the top of my head lol )

EDIT: I realized the " HELP" was in soul eater colors LOL
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Critique by ravencatastrophe Nov 9, 2012, 6:39:57 AM
I really do like this, and IF you were to continue it, I would read it. I like the form and expressions of each character and it gives you a vibe of what type of character they are in their characteristics. Even the most simple mistakes or not perfect anatomy makes the comic look fun. The font you used looks like it belongs there and not out of place. You spelled the word 'Finally' wrong though, sorry, it was bothering me xD Other than that, it looks great and very individual. I have yet to see a comic, or story with the plot of "Patrolling and rescuing Pokemon". It's similar to the Pokemon Rescue Team series, but as far as we know, there are no guilds. (: Hope this helped. Love your art! :meow:
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:iconnepkatluvr:
Nepkatluvr Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I love it!!!! I would love to see this continued. ^^
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:icongolden-brush:
Golden-Brush Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2015  Student Digital Artist
aw man I would love to continue this when I get time, I have it all scripted too! maybe one day!! But thank you!!
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:iconnepkatluvr:
Nepkatluvr Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
No problem ^^
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flygon7777 Featured By Owner May 27, 2013
this is cute, i really like your art style. one thing though, what are those striped things on eevee's front legs?
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:icongolden-brush:
Golden-Brush Featured By Owner May 27, 2013  Student Digital Artist
lol, thanks a bunch

Oh they were suppose to be like arm stockings or whateverr
but i've revamped her design a bit so she does'nt look like this anymore...
i'll try to update her soon as possible :)
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:iconpipi800:
pipi800 Featured By Owner May 4, 2013
WAHOO! * throws away pants and shirt * IM NAKED!!!!
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:icongolden-brush:
Golden-Brush Featured By Owner May 5, 2013  Student Digital Artist
: /
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:iconspriingy:
Spriingy Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Student Digital Artist
OMG LOL THIS IS SO EPIC AND AMAAAZING!!
you should make a comic, I dunno, maybe about pokemon or anything! or you could just continue this one, the layout is perfect too!
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:icongolden-brush:
Golden-Brush Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Student Digital Artist
thank you so much lou!!
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:iconspriingy:
Spriingy Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Student Digital Artist
you're welcome!
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:iconsambalakkat:
sambalakkat Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Student Digital Artist
awesome...........:)
get ready for the badguy
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:icongolden-brush:
Golden-Brush Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Student Digital Artist
hahaha
the baaaaad guy
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:iconsambalakkat:
sambalakkat Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Student Digital Artist
yes
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:iconorigamiguitarist:
origamiguitarist Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
<3

nuff said

:icondummyplz:
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:icongolden-brush:
Golden-Brush Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Student Digital Artist
:)
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:iconspywestie:
SpyWestie Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I want more!!! this is SOOOOO awesome! :D I love the layout and everything!
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:icongolden-brush:
Golden-Brush Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Student Digital Artist
aww thanks so much westie!
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:iconspywestie:
SpyWestie Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No problem ^^
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:iconsuperraichu101:
superraichu101 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:D your style really came through. It would be really cool if it went on.

if ya ever need help with writing... let me know
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:icongolden-brush:
Golden-Brush Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Student Digital Artist
thanks a bunch!
definitly if i need help with writeing i'll talk to you :D
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:iconorigamiguitarist:
origamiguitarist Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
... i am here too, ya know

LOL
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Tiiria Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012   Digital Artist
Third panel, where it appears to be that the bottom left bubble is read before the upper right bubble is awkward bubble placement. If that makes sense. Like, I naturally read the "Hey! I can totally have --" bubble before the "Like you know how to have fun, Tiny" bubble and it didn't make sense that way. Then I realized I was supposed to read it the other way around. The first-read bubble should be top left and the second should be lower, and on the right of it. Does that make sense? Idk if that makes sense. You could look up how to make comics easily readable. That could help.

Also, bottom panel is huge for no good reason. The entire left side of it is blank.

Other than that, seems good. The art is nice and emotions are conveyed well. I wouldn't know about plot since this is just the first page, but it seems like it could go places. Personality is shown. It's good.
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Golden-Brush Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thanks so much!
this will definitely help me with the second page!
thanks for the great critique :D
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princess-Aigis Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
SO AWESOME OMG
Great work for a first comic :3

I wish I could make comics properly >3>

I REQUEST FOR THOU TO PUT WHISPER IN
XD
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Golden-Brush Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Student Digital Artist
:D
won't that be be a blast
I was thinking so but it would have to be a non main characte would tht be kay?
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princess-Aigis Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Of course 8D As long as you let her in the comic in a bit, I don't care whether she's minor or a cameo :hug:
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Golden-Brush Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Student Digital Artist
no prolem at all :D
it will be definitly very fun
but she might come in later i the comic
but definitly i will add her!
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princess-Aigis Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thankk you so much >w<
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:iconprincess-aigis:
princess-Aigis Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you so much >w<
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:icongolden-brush:
Golden-Brush Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Student Digital Artist
haha :)
no problem :)
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