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*Test* Pokemon comic page by Golden-Brush *Test* Pokemon comic page by Golden-Brush
Okay you guys, I want your opinion
This my first time on digital comics lol

so I need your opinion on the layout and all that...
If I get the time i might be able to continue this comic :)

( Please don't ask me about the names, I just put things from the top of my head lol )

EDIT: I realized the " HELP" was in soul eater colors LOL
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Critique by ravencatastrophe Nov 9, 2012, 6:39:57 AM
I really do like this, and IF you were to continue it, I would read it. I like the form and expressions of each character and it gives you a vibe of what type of character they are in their characteristics. Even the most simple mistakes or not perfect anatomy makes the comic look fun. The font you used looks like it belongs there and not out of place. You spelled the word 'Finally' wrong though, sorry, it was bothering me xD Other than that, it looks great and very individual. I have yet to see a comic, or story with the plot of "Patrolling and rescuing Pokemon". It's similar to the Pokemon Rescue Team series, but as far as we know, there are no guilds. (: Hope this helped. Love your art! :meow:
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flygon7777 Featured By Owner May 27, 2013
this is cute, i really like your art style. one thing though, what are those striped things on eevee's front legs?
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Golden-Brush Featured By Owner May 27, 2013  Student Digital Artist
lol, thanks a bunch

Oh they were suppose to be like arm stockings or whateverr
but i've revamped her design a bit so she does'nt look like this anymore...
i'll try to update her soon as possible :)
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pipi800 Featured By Owner May 4, 2013
WAHOO! * throws away pants and shirt * IM NAKED!!!!
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Golden-Brush Featured By Owner May 5, 2013  Student Digital Artist
: /
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Spriingy Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Student Digital Artist
OMG LOL THIS IS SO EPIC AND AMAAAZING!!
you should make a comic, I dunno, maybe about pokemon or anything! or you could just continue this one, the layout is perfect too!
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Golden-Brush Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Student Digital Artist
thank you so much lou!!
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Spriingy Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Student Digital Artist
you're welcome!
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sambalakkat Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Student Digital Artist
awesome...........:)
get ready for the badguy
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Golden-Brush Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Student Digital Artist
hahaha
the baaaaad guy
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sambalakkat Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Student Digital Artist
yes
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